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Friday, 28 November 2014

Soccer



Please comment on some of the aspects that you like about this digital story. Also comment on any changes that you would recommend that I make to this digital story. This is a short funny story about Casey and Jeff please comment on my video refresh the page if you wanna play it again.

3 comments:

Anthony said...

Hey Wiremu,
Awesome story. I like how you made the ball move
into the goal. You spelt shot wrong and both of the sentences do not
make sense.

Ducati said...

Hi Wiremu
Your story is cool but a bit boring, try and add more scripts

Abdurrahman said...

Hi Wiremu
Good Story but I have to agree with Anthony your story lacks a lot of things but still good try.

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